Free and flowing envied by all other hair, curls wrapping around one another. Mornings are rough i fell warm and tangled and she runs the bristles through the knots in each strand. Friends lost unable to hold onto the head of my owner. But once every knot is gone and she brushes through just one last time i feel clean and perfect. I know all that pain was worth it. For the rest of the day i feel pretty and free i feel them around look at me in pity cause they wish they could twist like me without being burned and ridged for the day. Then at the end of the day she puts me up and ties a black band around me. I dont mind them much as long as they're the ones without the meddle, usually they're not. I am all around happy with my life sometime i get angry with the white puffy stuff she uses to contain me so i go frizzy and get big. When she was little she was crazy, one time she ran a circular brush through me and it got stuck. A man with a silver blade came and cut lots of my friends off. It was a sad day and i made her hair as frizzy and crazy as i could to get my revenge. But i know now that it was a mistake and that she didnt mean to cut us off. In the end i like my home and i am here to stay.
I don't think she has a big attitude but she has some type of attitude.
It seems like a sad but funny nice story.
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i learned that she is a very crazy and wild and she is a free person.
Word choice was great and amazing!
I LOVE YOU KYLIE!!!!
Free and flowing envied by all other hair, curls wrapping around one another. Mornings are rough i fell warm and tangled and she runs the bristles through the knots in each strand. Friends lost unable to hold onto the head of my owner. But once every knot is gone and she brushes through just one last time i feel clean and perfect. I know all that pain was worth it. For the rest of the day i feel pretty and free i feel them around look at me in pity cause they wish they could twist like me without being burned and ridged for the day. Then at the end of the day she puts me up and ties a black band around me. I dont mind them much as long as they're the ones without the meddle, usually they're not. I am all around happy with my life sometime i get angry with the white puffy stuff she uses to contain me so i go frizzy and get big. When she was little she was crazy, one time she ran a circular brush through me and it got stuck. A man with a silver blade came and cut lots of my friends off. It was a sad day and i made her hair as frizzy and crazy as i could to get my revenge. But i know now that it was a mistake and that she didnt mean to cut us off. In the end i like my home and i am here to stay.
I don't think she has a big attitude but she has some type of attitude.
It seems like a sad but funny nice story.
Add more figurative language.
i learned that she is a very crazy and wild and she is a free person.
Word choice was great and amazing!
I LOVE YOU KYLIE!!!!